PASSIVE TO ACTIVE SENTENCES
GENERAL WAYS TO FIX:
AVOID:
STICK WITH --ED ENDINGS FORPAST TENSE AND ACTIVE VERBS!
EXAMPLES:
PASSIVE: The composing process is broken down into seven parts.
ACTIVE: Emig (1971) separated the composing process into seven parts.
PASSIVE: The aim of the study was to determine …
ACTIVE: The study aimed to determine …
PASSIVE: America has been portrayed as a classless society …
ACTIVE: Spring (2001) portrayed america as a classless society …
PASSIVE: were hoping … was making
ACTIVE: hoped … made
PASSIVE: … calls were made by government for vocational education …
ACTIVE: …government called for vocational education …
PASSIVE: … studying … focusing …
ACTIVE: … who studied … which focused …