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UNACCEPTABLE |
EMERGING |
DEVELOPING |
PROFICIENT |
INTRO |
No thesis
No context
No summary of points to be explored in body of paper |
Thesis stated
Little or no context
And/or no summary of the argument to be explored in the body of the paper
Or, thesis is unclear |
Thesis clear
Context addresses what and why
Summary of argument is included (i.e., overview of points to be discussed in body of paper) |
Introduction engages the reader and signals the intent of the paper
Language is fluent and interesting
Clear, relevant thesis stated
Context is clearly developed
Concession offered
Summary of argument is included |
BODY OF PAPER |
Unconnected to prompt
Unconnected to introduction
Unsupported opinions used to develop argument
No use of text references to support claims |
Prompt partially met
Ideas connected to introduction/ but organization is unclear
Claims based on texts but ideas not explored
Or, claims made but do not support an overall argument
Some use of text references to support claims
Each text treated separately |
Most points in prompt met
Each paragraph clearly connected to introduction or to preceding paragraph(s)
Claims based on text and the ideas are explored and developed
Claims build an argument
Good use of text references
Comparison and contrast of authors' ideas provided |
Prompt fully met
Parallel construction (paragraph order equals summary in introduction)
Appropriate use of text references to support claims
Thorough exploration of claims and possible counter-arguments to build argument
Language is engaging and fluent
Comparison and contrast of authors' ideas conceptually developed |
CONCLUSION |
No concluding paragraph
Or the paragraph introduces new information |
Concluding paragraph reviews some of major points
Conclusion not related to thesis |
Concluding paragraph reviews major points
Conclusion not related to thesis |
Reviews major points in interesting way
Offers conclusion about thesis |
ACCURACY OF CLAIMS |
Most claims indicate lack of understanding of the texts |
Part of the information indicates understanding of text but many gaps in logic or understanding |
Individual theories, models, research understood but connections reveal inaccurate understanding |
All claims demonstrate good understanding of authors' arguments in our texts and relationships of theories, models, research |
SYNTHESIS
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No synthesis.
Body of paper offers separate summaries of ideas from the texts but no generalizations, explanations, or conclusions. |
Attempts at synthesis indicated through combining ideas from the texts. However, no conclusions or generalizations are offered. |
Conclusions or generalizations offered but not both
Or conclusions & generalizations drawn directly from texts and do not represent ability to create new ideas |
The paper demonstrates
Ability to create new ideas and generalizations based upon previous knowledge and experiences.
Ability to relate knowledge from several areas and draw conclusions |
MECHANICS |
Many spelling errors that could have been detected by spell-checker
Many grammatical errors |
Spelling or grammatical errors but not both
Lack of noun/pronoun agreement
Lack of subject/verb agreement
Or other consistent grammatical errors |
Spelling or grammatical errors that spell check could miss |
Correct spelling
No grammatical errors |
APA |
Incorrect citation format
Incorrect reference format
Past tense not used
Active voice not used |
Some citations in correct form
Some references in correct form
Past tense used inconsistently
Active voice used inconsistently |
Most citations in correct form
Most references in correct form
Past tense used
Active voice used |
Correct citations
Correct reference list format
Appropriate use of past and present tense
Active voice |
Books covered: Wolfe, Bracey, Galvan, readings on Dewey, readings on Vygotsky and Neo-Vygotsky, Spring, Noddings, Arends