ARCHIVE - Downer revision suggestions

Lauren — Mon, 18 Feb 2008 20:47:10 -0800

Really all I'm trying to do is make this character less aggressively mean.

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Downer: Oh yeah, I should be so grateful. What is there to be grateful for? Everything is just a huge mess! All the time!

Pollyana:Gosh! I see all kinds of things... great family...

Downer:Don't even get me started on my family... Talk about a mess! First of all, my dad promised me he would pay for my school expenses, but he could only pay for two years of it! Even though he could somehow afford to go golfing three times a week the whole time he was supposed to be "saving up". Now I'm the one in debt. And my mom? Always on my case about something "Don't go outside, you'll catch the Bird Flu!" What a negative Nancy! She's always coming up with excuses to show up at my place unexpectedly, but she's probably just trying to catch me with drugs or something like that.

ARCHIVE - Suggestions from Sunday's Group Discussion

Jill Story — Tue, 05 Feb 2008 19:02:35 -0800

On Saturday when the Gratitude and Flow group got together we discussed:

One way to give credit to "Our Town" is to run a clip of "Our Town" much like what Kricket has done on our website. A lot of us hadn't heard of "Our Town" before and thought that it would be easy to run a clip to the audience to help them understand what we are trying to do. This way we can ease up on repeating or saying "Our Town" so much in the beginning of the play.

Another thing that our group discussed was what should the play be called? Here are just a few suggestions:

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