The Academic Essay
We will look, in your academic essay, information that will tell the
reader as many as possible of the following aspects about you*:
1. command of information covered in
your program or project;
2. understanding of central ideas;
3. imaginative and creative use of subject matter;
4. ability to think, verbalize ideas and plan strategies for problem
solving;
5. writing ability;
6. class contribution (preparation, sharing, participation)**;
7. growth over the quarter (or year); and
8. diligence and effort;
(*)Adapted from the Faculty Handbook
(**)The tools we use to voluntarily exchange information are: email (to
share text and ppt presentations), this web site, our moodle site, our
program list, phone calls, visiting time (also for presentations and
learning summary seminars) in the classroom every tuesday and thursday
and every other saturday in our Theory to Praxis seminar. We have
recently opened the possibility of using Skype video/phone and share
work via You Tube with one of us for now as an initiation period.
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Sample
of Academic essay:
Since his enrollment at the Evergreen State College in 2006, Jon
wanted to fully embrace the concept of integrated learning. He wanted
to be part of a program that allowed him the freedom to choose his own
curriculum and create his own personal path of discovery and learning.
By enrolling in this program for fall and winter quarters, Jon has
accepted the challenge to be a self-motivator and the prime
investigator of his own academic path.
In the Fall quarter, Jon focused on three main subject areas of study:
Spanish, History and Agriculture. For Spanish, Jon directed most of his
work through the on-campus language lab where he spent 1-2 hours 3 days
a week working with Rosetta Stone and writing short stories in Spanish.
Through these exercises he gained a strong grasp on the basic structure
of Spanish grammar and furthered his vocabulary base. He also attended
Spanish speaking conversation groups with regularity throughout the
quarter in preparation for the Spanish immersion he was to experience
on his trip winter quarter to Peru.
For the history component of Jon’s work he read texts and attended
lectures. The books he read are as follows: Makes Me Wanna Holler by
Nathan McCall, Women, Race, and Class by Angela Davis, Confessions of
an Economic Hit Man by John Perkins, Cultural Theory: an Introduction
by Philip Smith, and Imago by Octavia Butler. These books do not follow
a traditional “history” path, but instead helped Jon learn about issues
including, race, ethnicity, class, identity, and the history of people
who have had their history marginalized within the broader context of
the master narrative. Jon attended lectures about current events
including Obama’s election, racism towards Middle Eastern “looking”
people, and feminism. Fall quarter Jon broadened his knowledge, and
gained valuable understanding of how culture impacts history and how
history impacts culture.
Finally, during the fall quarter Jon started down a new path of study
to explore sustainable Agriculture. Jon both read texts and volunteered
time on Evergreen’s organic farm in order to begin understanding the
issues surrounding sustainable agriculture. The texts he read included,
Growing Vegetables West of the Cascades by Steve Solomon, The Secret
Life of Plants by Peter Tompkins and Christopher Bird, and The politics
of GM food: a comparative study of the UK, USA, and EU by Dave Toke.
These texts provided valuable introductory information about the basics
of sustainable food production, as well as an introduction to the
arguments for and against genetically modified foods. The Secret Life
of Plants introduced Jon to a side of science that many people scoff
at; plants are sentient beings and thus opened the door for a new
understanding and way to look at the world.
Winter Quarter Jon travelled abroad to Peru for a family stay and
immersion into Peruvian culture and the Spanish speaking world. During
his stay in Peru, Jon continued his learning of Spanish, study of
American history as well as learning a little about Peru, its culture
and people.
For the first 5 weeks in Peru, Jon attended an informal Spanish class
at a local community school in order to ask questions about the
language, and have Spanish dialogue. At this community school he also
taught English to 6-11 year old children, which helped further his
Spanish comprehension. He spent time with a Peruvian family that
allowed him the opportunity to engage in Spanish dialogue at anytime he
wanted. All these combined, along with traveling through the country,
allowed for a complete Spanish immersion with plenty of practice and
study.
During his stay in Peru, Jon continued his study of American history
and read the following books on American history: The Audacity of
Hope by Barack Obama, The End of Poverty by Jeffery Sachs, and A
People’s History of the United States by Howard Zinn. As part of his
academic focus at Evergreen, these texts furthered his knowledge of the
American political system, the histories of marginalized people and the
repercussions American political decisions have on the world. During
his stay in Peru, Jon was able to speak directly with people who had
very different opinions on the United States, and learn that many
people in other countries depend on the USA for economic stability.
Therefore, when the USA is in an economic crisis, people in poorer
countries are in a worse crisis.
Lastly, during his stay in Peru Jon learned about Peru and its culture.
He kept a daily journal that contained both reflections and short
stories about his observations in Peru. Through his writings, he
developed a more creative style of both travel writing and personal
reflection in order to compare and contrast the United States and Peru.
He also read two texts, Pedagogy of the Oppressed by Paulo Freire and
Broad and Alien is the World by Ciro Alegria, which helped Jon gain an
understanding of the oppressive situation the Native Peruvians face and
the response to oppression by Freire. Freire’s text was seminal for
Jon’s learning this quarter, because education is one of his long-term
goals and Freire’s book contains important ideas (indirectly) about how
the Western education system functions. The book stresses the
importance of dialogue and “non-banking” style education and are two
ideas important for him to keep in mind for the future.
Credit distribution:
Fall quarter
4 Sustainable Agriculture
4 Intermediate Spanish
8 U.S. History with a focus in Cultural Studies.
Winter quarter
4 US history
4 Creative Writing
6 Advanced Spanish Conversation
2 Peruvian History and Culture.
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