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Step 3...is it just fish out shouldn't feed? what about other wildlife?

Step 5 could say "Try to step on sand and gravel around the coral without disturbing it" or something a little more concise.

Step eight should have a comma between 'excursion' and 'make'

Step ten I would put at the beginning, not as a step but as a precursor to your steps. 

Step nine I would omit or work into a few sentences of intro, including step ten.


that's all! looks awesome, makes me want to go snorkeling :)
- annie


Good start. 
*In addition to Annie's comments, I suggest warning about fins striking corals. 
*Probably break up #10 into two.
*Do you have any photos?
*Safety issues? (Sunscreen, cuts, etc.)

--Erik


I agree with the above comments.
*I think the "steps" could be re-organized to make more logical sense.
*Maybe add and introduction with something like the benefits of preserving corals...
*Figures would be great.
-Mary