ARCHIVE - Comments on: Q- Anima/mus/out/in #1 http://blogs.evergreen.edu/ealphabet/q-is-or-quilt/ Flocks of Words, Tracks of Letters, Butterflies of the Soul Mon, 15 Sep 2014 12:07:03 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=4.2.2 ARCHIVE - By: Molly B. http://blogs.evergreen.edu/ealphabet/q-is-or-quilt/#comment-18 Mon, 18 Feb 2013 23:09:19 +0000 http://blogs.evergreen.edu/ealphabet/?p=1720#comment-18 How do these edits look?

]]> ARCHIVE - By: williasa http://blogs.evergreen.edu/ealphabet/q-is-or-quilt/#comment-9 Mon, 18 Feb 2013 19:12:49 +0000 http://blogs.evergreen.edu/ealphabet/?p=1720#comment-9 Can you help the reader be an effective quilter of your words? What do we need to know in order to begin with watching you wash temple walls (which ones?), then articulate what the I-as-poet and the I-as-person wants? How, exactly, is this wanting connected to all the pain that interrupts, and continually questions the words/worlds that surround it?
What about the story?

the old story of pain?

of suffering?

of forcing?

of sickness?

of hatred?
What is this, y/our old story of pain? Why is it mute in this poem?

Editing suggestion: Please select the appropriate category (e.g., poetry not Bachelard, correct?)

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