Talk:Evolution Aesthetics
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Should this page be called "Evolutionary aesthetics" instead? Thuesene 10:36, 16 November 2011 (PST)
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I think it should either be added to its own page on Wikipedia as "Evolutionary Aesthetics" or added as a subsection to the http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Aesthetics page. Or, both? With one or two sentences on the http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Aesthetics page linking to the new page. Thuesene 06:50, 21 November 2011 (PST)
The section that starts "Go back to the simpler days" isn't really written in encyclopedia format. It needs to be re-written in a more factual manner.
Did you see how I set up the internal link to Meme in the section "Alternatives"? All of the links to Wikipedia pages should be set up like that and they will link just fine when you copy and paste this into Wikipedia. The "External Links" section for Wikipedia pages should be removed.Thuesene 07:09, 21 November 2011 (PST)
Based on what I've read in your summary paper, I think that more could be added to all sections... Also, be sure to use plain, but professional language.
-Mary
