
Zena (zspins@yahoo.com)
Amy Enser (Hellcat_rugger@hotmail.com)
"Hippopotamus
Migration in Africa"
TREATMENT
The sidewalk in front of
and old theatre building is dimly lit by yellow and red lights. A clown
dressed in worn out clothes accepts handouts in exchange for balloons
and single stem flowers. The clowns attitude seems enthusiastic and
optimistic even though it is constantly brushed off and ignored. The
only attention given to the clown is by a little girl who Is quickly
pulled away by her mother.
Later that evening a little
boy is getting ready for bed. He unknowingly steps on the arm of old
clown doll while climbing into bed. The old clown doll comes alive.
It spends the evening in front of the mirror entertaining itself until
it realizes that it is stuck between the confines of the mirrors edges.
The clown then realizes its horrible destiny and begins to panic. After
struggling for what seems like forever, mornings light begins to enter
the room. The clowns life then returns to a still, unimportant object.
As morning breaks the little boy awakes and trips over the clown. He
then throws the clown into a chest shutting it into the darkness. The
clowns destiny is then spent locked away and forgotten while sounds
of life and laughter continue to be heard.
Cast list
Clown: wearing old worn
out circus attire. Owns an old bag containing balloons, plastic flowers,
scarfs, and random tricks.
Young couple: dressed alike
in conservative attire.
Family of three: Father,
mother, and three year old girl.
Little Boy:
dressed in pajamas.
SCREENPLAY
FADE IN:
EXT. SIDEWALK - EVENING
a clown stands on the sidewalk
in front of an old theatre. The clown is adorned in typical clown attire
(oversized pants with suspenders, spotted bowtie, large shoes, painted
face), but has obviously been worn down to rags. A tin can sits on the
ground beside the clown, nearly empty but for a few small coins. On
the clowns other side rests a tiny bag of deflated balloons and
a knapsack overflowing with various clown paraphernalia. The clown amuses
itself with the task of contorting a balloon into a figure. The streets
are busy with evening traffic and pedestrian activity.
A young couple passes the
clown.
COUPLE
(intimately
giggling)
The clown attempts to offer
the couple his balloon creation, now in the shape of an animal. They
ignore him completely and continue to pass.
EXT. SIDEWALK CONTINUOUS
A mother, father and small
child approach the clown from the opposite direction. They appear relaxed,
but noticeably tense up as they draw nearer to the clown.
The clown again offers
his balloon figure. The balloon is in its left hand, the tin can now
in the right.
FATHER
(raising
hand in protest) Please, Please
The child reaches out to
take the balloon, but is tugged along by her mother.
The clown puts the tin
can down, offering the balloon a last time to the child.
The urgent child cries
softly, reaching for the gift.
MOTHER
(sternly)
Were
in a hurry, dear.
The mother tugs more persistently
and the child is unwillingly pulled away, arm still outstretched.
The clown sighs briefly,
lowering the balloon to its side. More pedestrians fill the sidewalk
and continue to ignore the clowns bumbling attempts to entertain.
EXT. SIDEWALK NIGHT
The clown gazes into the
tin can, which only contains a handful of change, and rattles it to
get a better look at the various coins. The clown despairingly slumps
back against the theatre wall and rolls slightly right. The clown sees
its reflection in the ticket booth window.
FADE
TO BLACK.
FADE IN:
INT. CHILDS ROOM
- NIGHT
A childs room is
dimly lit by moonlight from a single window. Subtle hints of light pour
in from the hallway where sounds of movement are heard.
A clown doll lays face
down halfway wedged under the bed. It is dressed similarly to the clown
from the street, its face expressionless. A child enters the room and
closes the door. The child, wearing hippopotamus slippers, climbs into
bed and carelessly steps on the protruding clown.
INT. CHILDS ROOM
- MOMENTS LATER
The clown blinks. It emerges
from under the bed and makes its way to the other side of the room,
near the window.
INT. CHILDS ROOM
- CONTINUOUS
A clock on the wall reads
9:36 p.m. Its continuous tick is the only audible sound.
INT. CHILDS ROOM
- CONTINUOUS
The clown stops in front
of a standing mirror and begins playing with its reflection as if it
were another clown separate from itself.
The clowns reflection
seems to take a life of its own and begins struggling with the confines
of the mirrors frame. Its face becomes distorted with fear and
panic. Its makeup smears, further disfiguring its face. The tick of
the clock becomes louder as the clown reflections struggle intensifies.
INT. CHILDS ROOM
- HOURS LATER
The clock on the wall now
reads 5:43 a.m.
INT. CHILDS ROOM
- CONTINUOUS
The room has become noticeably
brighter with the break of day. The clown is still standing in front
of the mirror. Both it and its reflection turn towards the clock.
The clown rushes back towards
the bed, leaving its reflection sadly reaching after it, similarly to
the child on the street reaching for the clowns balloon figure.
INT. CHILDS ROOM
- CONTINUOUS
An alarm sounds and rustling
is heard from the childs bed. The clown is no longer in sight.
A mothers voice is heard from the hallway calling to the child.
MOTHER
(O.S.)
Honey,
its time to get up.
CHILD
(groggily)
Im
coming.
The child steps out of
bed and trips on the clown doll, which is again halfway wedged under
the bed.
CHILD
(annoyed)
Ouch!
Stupid clown.
The child roughly grabs
the clown.
INT. TOY CHEST -- CONTINUOUS
The child stuffs the clown
facedown in an open toy chest. The chest is cluttered with stuffed hippos
and some various other toys.
The lid of the chest begins
to close, as if on its own, slowly cutting light from the scene. The
sounds from the street, life and laughter, grow steadily louder with
the close of the lid.
BLACK.
Continuity
Script
A Sidewalk
This scene takes place
in the late evening where traffic is continuous and people fill the
sidewalks.
1. MS: The front of
the clown as the clown creates a figure out of the balloons. The clown
seems amused in its effort. Low, steady noise of traffic and pedestrians.
2. MS: Slight low angle. We see the sidewalk stretching out
to the clowns right. The intimate giggling of a young couple becomes
audible as they enter the scene from the left. The clown enthusiastically
offers them his creation. They take no notice and walk swiftly by.
3. MLS: The clown
stands in front of an old theatre. To his right sits a tin can, a
bag of balloons, a small knapsack that contains various bits of clown
paraphernalia. Cars pass in front of the camera temporarily hiding
the scene.
4. MS: This time revealing
the sidewalk stretching out to the to the clowns left. The clown has
a balloon in his left hand and a tin can in his right. A mother, father,
and young child enter from offscreen walking in the direction of the
clown. The clown excitedly offers his balloon to which the father
raises a hand dismissively.
Father: Please. Please.
The child turns
to take the balloon as the mother tugs her along.
5. MS: The camera
tracks forward on the clown bending to set the tin can down and again
persistently offers the balloon to the child.
6. MCU: The child
pulls against the will of the mother, arm stretched to take the gift.
Her tee-shirt has a picture of a hippopotamus, similar to the shape
of the clowns balloon . Child cries softly .
Mother: Were in a
hurry, dear.
7. MCU: Clown sighs
briefly, lowering the balloon to his side.
8. MLS: From across
the street traffic continues to pass and pedestrians enter the scene
from both sides
of the sidewalk. The clown fumbles around trying to sell his balloon
figures and tricks with no success (this is open to elaboration; may
include pulling scarves out of sleeves, balloon figures bursting, etc).
9. CU: crossfade to
tin can in clowns hand.
10. CU: High angle
from clowns perspective. Clown shakes the can and a handful of change
rattles within.
11. MS: From the front
the clown despairingly slumps against the theatre gazing into the
can. He rolls to the right and sees his reflection in the ticket booth
window. Fade to black.
A Childs
Room
The room is dark , lit
only by moonlight through a single window. Subtle hints of light pours
in from the hallway.
12. MS: A clown doll
lays face down halfway wedged under the bed. Movement is heard offscreen
as a child enters the room, the door closes and the childs legs
enter from offscreen and carelessly steps on the protruding clown
as the child climbs into bed.
13. ECU: From clowns
perspective, we see the clowns blank expression. Clown blinks.
14. MLS: The end half
of the childs bed occupies the foreground. The clown emerges
up from under the bed.
15. MS: Track left.
The clown moves to the left corner of the room near the window.
16. ECU: Analog clock
on wall with audible tick as time passes.
17. MS: Back of the
clown as clown approaches a standing mirror.
18. MCU: Clowns reflection
in mirror.
19. MS: Camera pulls
back at an angle, showing both clown and its reflection. Clown moves
close to the mirror looking intently into the world of its reflection.
Clown continues the game of playing with its reflection.
20. MCU: Reflection
in mirror. The clowns reflection presses against the mirror as if
trying to get out. The clowns reflection becomes fearful and anxious
as it begins to struggle with the boundaries of the framed mirror.
Tears distort the clowns make up as it now begins to panic. Audio
of the clock begins to rise and becomes more significant.
21. ECU: Clock on
the wall showing extreme time lapse.
22. MLS: Clown remains
standing in front of the mirror with back to camera. Its reflection
is completely distorted. The room has subtly become more illuminated
as day begins to break. The clown and its reflection look up towards
the clock. The clown rushes offscreen to the right, leaving its reflection
staring longingly after it, arm outstretched in one last effort to
free itself from the mirror.
23. MLS: pan right
as clown heads back towards the childs bed. Rustling is heard
from the bed as child stirs in anticipation of dawn.
24. CU: Alarm clock
rings. A book about Africa rests on the bedside table near the clock,
slightly
out of focus.
The room is now softly lit with morning sunlight.
25. MLS: Camera tracks
back to previous shot of bed in foreground. The clown is out of sight.
Soft moaning comes from the bed.
Mother from hallway (O.S.):
Honey, its time to get up.
Child (groggily): Im
coming. From the shoulders down the child emerges from the opposite
side of the bed.
26. MCU: Pan down
with childs legs as child steps out of bed. The child trips
on now motionless clown doll.
Child: Ouch! Stupid clown.
The childs hand enters shot as it bends down and roughly grabs
the clown.
27. MS: low angle
from inside an open toy chest to the right of the bed (which has been
previously blocked out of view by the bed). The shot is cluttered
with stuffed hippos from within the chest. The child is slightly out
of focus as it approaches the chest, clown in clenched hand. The clown
is thrown, facing down towards the camera, into the chest.
28. ECU: The clowns
expressionless face nearly fills the camera. The lid of the chest
begins to close, slowly cutting the light from the shot. Sounds of
life and laughter continuing become audible in synch with the closing
of the chests lid. The close of the lid cuts